Tuesday, May 29, 2012

jack and jill

Jack and jill are brother and sister and one long exahsting day planning to steal the crown. Jack and jill finally made it to the pallace, They snuck in and pretened like they were servants. Slowly and steadily they slowly and steadily they walked down the long hall to wear the king kept all his prized possentions. Jack made it to the door, jill stood watch and jack slowly turned the handle. The door opened and jack went in he looked  around and spotted the crown he grabbed it as quickly and quietly as he could. Jack came out of the room and slid the crown into his jacket. Thats when the King walked by he stared at them  blankly. Then asked why they were down there and quickly said oh never mind that, go fetch me a pail of water from that well on the hill. They walk up the hill, then they got to the well and lowered the pail down. Jack was startled to see that when jill pulled the pail up it wasnt water. Jack couldnt identify what was in the water. But as he was startled he fell down the hill, with every turn he could feel the crown breaking. Jill turns to see Jack falling down the hill sh4e wonders why as she looks into the bucket. She sees the red fluid and drops the pail she starts to run after jack and slips of the fluid. Jack and Jill were rolling down the hill. They finally made it down to the bottom stood up looked twards the castle. They saw there opportunity to run. They took it if the evil king that they were under command of would have noticed they were a bit late. They never would be free'd. They ran as fast as they could through the forest.

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